I like the first one the best.
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Thanks honey
"A" is the best out of all of them.
wow everyone likes A.
Definitely "A", yeah.
for sure
hands down A
but i was promied a 15 hour lunch break...fuckin slave driver
:D
you know it gurl ;D
when am i gonna be your fucking game artist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
soon enough amigo
I once the animation is finished I like the final design of B the best, but overall I like A the best.
yeah I'm kind partial to B myself. I was going to have them fall into place but then I'd have to do everything backwards and it wouldn't have worked out.
I like A's color but I like B's composition better. :)
I agree, although the color scheme of A always reminds me of a Nike or Adidas ad.
A.
Simplicity is beauty.
indeed!
Well the "C" One Sounds better Because it looks like the 14hourlunchbreak
is a RICH guy
and i wanna be RICH
lmao, he's totally RICH
B is better IMO. but there are a few problems with your intros:
1- Your animations are too slow. We want to see your name real quick.
2- The bulk of the animation should show your full name. The bulk of the animation should not consist in your name appearing gradually and thus being incomplete.
3- The fonts that you used are not appealing except for B.
4- There is no connection with your name (i.e. 14 hr lunch break). There should be some sort of clever depiction of a lunch break or some elements referring to it. Why not use a font or elements used in cafeteria? A clock and the number 14?
There is no shame in using any of these intros but I think that you can do better if you go back to the drawing board for a little while.
JB
All valid points, except maybe the first one. All of the logos were suppose to sync up with the music. I suppose I could completely restart from square one.
I do agree with the fonts being boring, but I don't want them to look too crazy.
I normally frown upon people who make animated intros for themselves, but B was pretty cool.
:( but that's what all the kool kids are doing these days.
A is the one you should go with.
probably
I say "A", but "B" if you wanna add something at the end of the bar like a picture or logo or something.
yep, I might just do that
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I guess nobody said it yeat... but yeah "A" is the coolest bro.
great username buddy ;D
A .
I personally don't love any of them--They're too bland.
I think C would be best if you included something else on what looks like a table--possibly some silverware with a plate with a half-eaten sandwich on it or something.
But if you're opposed to changing them A is my favorite the way it is. :3
I'd say A, with C in second place. B just has too much empty space, so it seems very bland. A and C both make nice use of space, although C is a little bit plain. So, A wins in my opinion.
A
Apparently, just one letter isn't long enough.
Sonucais
"A"
14hourlunchbreak
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