i was very touching and nicely presented. some of the dialogue seemed kind of weird and out of place. like the "ugh, no" from the old man and the "sigh sigh" at the end.
altogether it was nice though.
Eeeeeyyyyy. But seriously this was a fantastic piece. It was a little odd to see different styles clash at the end and everything happened so fast without any development. Overall though you guys did a great job. Very professional.
this has everything a good flash should have. the music is great, the animation is smooth and seamless and the plot is fantastic. I love the ending when his eyes get all big.
You really need to improve your work. It looks like very little effort was put into this and if you had taken some time with it I'm sure it could have been better. I'll leave a little constructive criticism below, which obviously you will disregard and tell me to "fuck off" because you're not funny and think cursing will make you cool. You're 15. You're not cool.
The graphics need a lot of work. Maybe some variety for the drawings of Dylan instead of the same picture of him over and over again? Also I've noticed you overuse filters in the text of your movies and games. It doesn't look very good and it's hard to read. You've also stolen a few pictures off of google images including the gun and Sephiroth.
The "animations" consist of motion tweens poorly slopped together. Maybe try your hand at frame by frame animation. It will end up looking a lot better and make it seem like you spent time on making this game instead of the 5 seconds it took you to shit it out.
The game itself isn't an original idea but if it had been executed well it might have worked in this case. It's only buttons and I can't really see the point in that. Maybe if you had some control over how you killed him, like the action sequence buttons in the second Kingdom Hearts game. That would give the game some life and give the user more control over what happens. Also it would be nice to have a mute button for the music. I had to mute my computer to type this review out.
Lastly I'd like to comment on your poor attitude toward other people. Looking at your comment and review responses I'm led to believe you have some sort of mental disability. It's amazing you're able to make flash, (albit the poor quality), what with your down syndrome or autism or whatever you have. No stable minded person would be so persistently hurtful and bad. Whenever someone criticizes your work they're immediately replied with a "fuck you". Whenever someone asks you to improve your drawing style or actually take some time to draw something, they're replied with a "fuck you". Basically if someone disagrees with you they're met with a "fuck you" and they're banned from commenting on your stuff. You're like a power hungry Nazi, dude. It's sad really. Newgrounds gives you the option to ban someone from commenting on your newsposts when they're blatantly spamming, but you use it whenever someone thinks you aren't the greatest thing in the world.
Well I seem to be ranting now so I'll stop. I can't wait to see what witty response you have for me, because it will most definitely be retarded in some nature. Also there might be some gramatical issues but never mind those, I'm rushing out to dinner.
You are a pop-culture game making machine! BP Oil Spill, Charlie Sheen, and now this?
Needless to say it's very well done. Exceptional art, neat gameplay and good for a quick laugh. Well done sir.
I remember seeing some of the unfinished versions in the animation forum. Anyway it's really cool and the preloader background should be a wallpaper in the downloads section.
I forgot the answers to my own quiz so 0/10 0/10 0/10 sorry it has to be done.
oh yeah I added extra sad faces for emphasis and because one was too short. :(
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All 58 flash Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 3, 2011
a tear jerker
i was very touching and nicely presented. some of the dialogue seemed kind of weird and out of place. like the "ugh, no" from the old man and the "sigh sigh" at the end.
altogether it was nice though.
also, those sidewalks look familiar. jk ;)
Wow, thanks for your review and I'm glad that you are getting the game well presented, haaaaaaaa, I understand what you mean about the sidewalk ;)
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 13, 2011
1000th Review
Eeeeeyyyyy. But seriously this was a fantastic piece. It was a little odd to see different styles clash at the end and everything happened so fast without any development. Overall though you guys did a great job. Very professional.
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 30, 2011
adorable
this has everything a good flash should have. the music is great, the animation is smooth and seamless and the plot is fantastic. I love the ending when his eyes get all big.
Rated 0 / 5 stars April 15, 2011
Incredibly Poor. Please try harder next time.
You really need to improve your work. It looks like very little effort was put into this and if you had taken some time with it I'm sure it could have been better. I'll leave a little constructive criticism below, which obviously you will disregard and tell me to "fuck off" because you're not funny and think cursing will make you cool. You're 15. You're not cool.
The graphics need a lot of work. Maybe some variety for the drawings of Dylan instead of the same picture of him over and over again? Also I've noticed you overuse filters in the text of your movies and games. It doesn't look very good and it's hard to read. You've also stolen a few pictures off of google images including the gun and Sephiroth.
The "animations" consist of motion tweens poorly slopped together. Maybe try your hand at frame by frame animation. It will end up looking a lot better and make it seem like you spent time on making this game instead of the 5 seconds it took you to shit it out.
The game itself isn't an original idea but if it had been executed well it might have worked in this case. It's only buttons and I can't really see the point in that. Maybe if you had some control over how you killed him, like the action sequence buttons in the second Kingdom Hearts game. That would give the game some life and give the user more control over what happens. Also it would be nice to have a mute button for the music. I had to mute my computer to type this review out.
Lastly I'd like to comment on your poor attitude toward other people. Looking at your comment and review responses I'm led to believe you have some sort of mental disability. It's amazing you're able to make flash, (albit the poor quality), what with your down syndrome or autism or whatever you have. No stable minded person would be so persistently hurtful and bad. Whenever someone criticizes your work they're immediately replied with a "fuck you". Whenever someone asks you to improve your drawing style or actually take some time to draw something, they're replied with a "fuck you". Basically if someone disagrees with you they're met with a "fuck you" and they're banned from commenting on your stuff. You're like a power hungry Nazi, dude. It's sad really. Newgrounds gives you the option to ban someone from commenting on your newsposts when they're blatantly spamming, but you use it whenever someone thinks you aren't the greatest thing in the world.
Well I seem to be ranting now so I'll stop. I can't wait to see what witty response you have for me, because it will most definitely be retarded in some nature. Also there might be some gramatical issues but never mind those, I'm rushing out to dinner.
Thanks
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 16, 2011
Damn Pox!
You are a pop-culture game making machine! BP Oil Spill, Charlie Sheen, and now this?
Needless to say it's very well done. Exceptional art, neat gameplay and good for a quick laugh. Well done sir.
Rated 5 / 5 stars February 26, 2011
Oh yes
I could watch this for hours. In fact I could watch any of your loops for hours.
don't do it... please... don't... you'll die... {:0
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 10, 2011
Very cool
I remember seeing some of the unfinished versions in the animation forum. Anyway it's really cool and the preloader background should be a wallpaper in the downloads section.
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 2, 2011
:( :( :(
I forgot the answers to my own quiz so 0/10 0/10 0/10 sorry it has to be done.
oh yeah I added extra sad faces for emphasis and because one was too short. :(
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 6, 2010
Oh no, not this again
Hey my name's William. PRETTY COOL.
Rated 5 / 5 stars November 7, 2010
Best collab on ng
I cant stop listening to cosmictequila unplugged. Good job everyone and happy belated birthday cosmic.
thx bro.
Slappy thanks you too.